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In which Adelaide and Evelyn work to adapt to their new circumstances.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
I like how Evelyn just feels like shes constantly walking on eggshells through any conversation, despite Adelaide not minding. I am looking forward to their parents finding out about their situations, should be fun!
Posted by MomDoer69 2 years ago Report
Great work! I can’t wait for the next part!
Posted by Broniele97 2 years ago Report
Beautiful, can’t wait to se more!
Posted by skorpio 2 years ago Report
I just discovered this series, and it's great! I like seeing all the ways Addy and Evelyn have to deal with everyday life in the situation.
Posted by Skeiron 2 years ago Report
This is interesting. I haven't seen this kind of dynamic explored much. Curious to see where this leads :)
Posted by RoseBlossom 2 years ago Report
Just read all the other parts after reading part 4, needed to find out how Evelyn got stuck, you do a really good job with characterization and dialogue! Evelyn’s been my fav so far, hopefully we don’t see her gurgled anytime soon
Posted by ScarKnight 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Character voicing is one of those things I get anxious about in my writing, so it's nice to hear that it's working for someone!