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Jonah, a simple farmhand, finds himself at the mercy of the farmer's daughter, Bessie. Will he survive? Maybe...
There are multiple endings here, three, and I guess, if enough people comment on which one they want to be canon, in case there is a sequel, one will be chosen.
Art done by AI. I take no credit whatsoever. I am a pleb with no artistic skill :(
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Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
Really great writing. The endings bother me though. Bessie offered him to be given to her father and I feel like him not getting back in time for them is a copout. Literally is one actually in that ending lol. She can't just call her dad? Still, seriously good stuff.
Posted by Grec0R0man 2 years ago Report
*Casts suspension of disbelief*
LMAO
Seriously though, I am glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. Also, not sure it was intentional, but "copout" was a good pun lol.
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
Oh I really enjoyed it. Bessie's "watch me!" was a great line. Jonah probably wouldn't agree about the pun though haha