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Here's a story I wrote, set in a Sci-fi setting I made for D&D. To note, Shiraza look like anthro sharks, and Hitroli look like draenei/eredar. They are their own alien races, but they look very similar because I liked that appearance.
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Posted by Ev0nix 2 years ago Report
Hmm. Not bad but severely lacking in detail
Posted by Tyuqa 2 years ago Report
I'll try to keep that in mind, I always worry about over describing and making the story drag on with no action.
Posted by Ev0nix 2 years ago Report
Not unreasonable, but detail can be gripping in it's own right, I think this sort of thing atleast favors a more detail heavy narration. Either way it's good to try things.
Added you as a watch.