This comic features a 'healthbar'. I thought it would be cool.

Intro: You have been living with your roommate Lola Bunny for a little over ten years now. After you guys became friends in high school, she has been helping you live life as a tiny person. It's not perfect living with her though. Sometimes she accidentaly steps on you, which can hurt a lot. Lately though, there has been a food shortage and you guys haven't eaten for a few days.

Panel 1: Lola calls you over and the first thing you notice is a very romantic look in her eyes. She mentions something about how she thinks she could fit you perfectly in her mouth, saying it would be 'cute'.

Panel 2: You go over to her almost against your will, since she picks you up half way there. When she lifts you above her head, the sudden change of altitude shocks you, and you can't help but marvel at the immense height you are currently at. You look over at Lola, forgetting that she's holding you, and she continues to hold a deep lustful expression. She then slowly opens her mouth to reveal her maw, and since she stuck out her tongue, you can see the dark, ominous throat that you are aware leads to certain doom. However, you trust Lola, and you are sure that the last thing she will ever try to do is eat you. She then proceeds to carry you closer to her mouth until you can feel her breath on you, and the closer you get, the more you realize that you will be able to fit into her mouth just barely. Lola realizes it too, and she is exited about it, however you are unable to see her expression.

Panel 3: Lola just barely manages to get you into her mouth. You fit, and it's surprisingly comfortable. Maybe this can be a new way for her to transport you. All of a sudden, everything around you gets smaller. You notice she's closing her mouth. You panic for a second then you realize she's probably just playing around with you. Several seconds pass by, and you start thinking to yourself: You're just one gulp away from becoming food. You're putting your entire life in Lola's hands right now. Then you look on your side into her throat and you realize there's no way you're fitting in there.

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