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After Cal's recovery and Jaime's hunt, they both find there are things about their relationship that they need to confront.
Like usual, let me know what you think!
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Posted by Destroyah23 2 years ago Report
Excellent work, the last quarter of the story really hit home for me because one of the hardest things when telling someone you love them is for them to ask "can you wait a little longer?".
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad that part was able to resonate with you. Means I did something right.
Posted by Yumyum18 2 years ago Report
Aww, so adorably delicious.
I loved Jaime and Cal's 'talk' and can't wait to see what 'cums' next for them.
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! I'm excited to write more of them in the future.
Posted by Noobfartter 2 years ago Report
I have a suggestion for a prompt for your vore stories. It mainly aspects will encompasses yoga and anal vore. It will be long so read when you want to.
I am thinking (can be, just a suggestion) that a group of thick mothers are doing yoga in the park or something, and either the mother's own child or son of a different mother is playing near by with his baseball with the other kids (i am bad with heights but am thinking around knee hight come pare to the mothers) but ball goes of course heads to one of the ladies, (can be his mother, if not and if the story continues they can be something more) and since thanks to ladies thick butts it gets stuck, that causes a small ripe and the tight pant so the ball gets half way in the anus while she is in downward dog position and since she is tire and sweating her skin is quite moist and she can't feel that something poked her. (Like how some people won't notice they are sitting on a tv remote)
The kid makes his way to the group while the other kids wait, and just caught a sight of it but the ball pops in when she moves to stand up. So now it is up to him to get it back.
It is up to you either, he goes and asks, he tries to reach in when she is in another position. And i prefer if her body can hide his body well like in your previous stories, and to make it more harder to noitce, you can add the fact she is pregnant so with her belly. It is like he not there.
Hope to hear from you soon and hope a story similar to this can be created
Posted by Noobfartter 2 years ago Report
I posted this to another creator but haven't heard back from. And after reading your stories which i love, i thought how about share with you one of my previous ideas for inspiration. And you can perhaps work it with what you like to write