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Mary & Troy Alternate Ch2 By Andris -- Report

The second chapter of the darkest timeline. Can Troy survive Mary's newfound kink and magical powers?



If you've read my work.
And it made you grin.
Plus you've got spare coin.
And the times aren't thin.
If you hope for more.
Cause it brightens your day.
Then I hope you'll consider.
Slinging change my way.

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Ragnow

Posted by Ragnow 2 years ago Report

Another lovely chapter, Andris!

I can sympathize with Troy so much and that's what I love about this alternate series. It's tough having your fantasies lived out and yet It's not quite what you picture. When It's less than what you expect at least you only walk away with disappointment. But when It's more than you could have imagined? For your own depraved fantasy to turn out overwhelming? That's downright terrifying, yet, ironically a fantasy in its own right.
And yet Troy is presently locked into a scenario of having no power and no way out with this super-charged version of Mary who is taking this fantasy "too far" and making Troy suffer to the point of sobbing and pleading for it to stop despite his lingering horniness for this exact scenario.

I love that in the face of such cruelty and impending doom Mary can eventually still make Troy so... obedient. It might take a bit of pushing, but he'll play the part she directs for him in the end.

Andris

Posted by Andris 2 years ago Report

=) You always leave the best comments Rag. And I'm so glad you got what I was trying to convey with the whole "fantasy turned overwhelming" thing.

I actually did some psychological research before writing these. I comment on this is the Anonymous series too. The formulae for friendship is "frequency, proximity, intensity, and duration". That's why people get stockholm syndrome and come to like their captors. It's a form of brainwashing.

And being stored inside a macro meets ALL of these requirements. It's a form of sexy ownership plus sensory deprivation. If it were real, it's very likely that the captives will would be undermined pretty fast. Especially if they were at all attracted to their captor.

Mary's wish made her better in every way. Stronger, more self possessed, more charismatic, but also smarter. I'm trying to show Mary's intelligence here. Being captured by a woman like this is a scary turn on.

But if she was a GENIUS...?

Ragnow

Posted by Ragnow 2 years ago Report

I definitely get what you mean by showing Mary's intelligence now! And I agree, a giantess like this is absolutely terrifying/hot. Scarousal is the word for it, and I think you hit that sweet spot in making Mary elicit that emotion and I love when I encounter such a female dom in erotica.

Stockholm Syndrome in a macro/micro story in general is always such a good idea.
Giantesses are known for their absolute physical domination, they get what they want, when they want by force. But an underrated aspect of this definitely is that also opens the avenue for some cruel psychological domination too like we see in this, especially with the powers Mary has.

Im so excited for the next chapter to see how this dynamic comtinues to take shape.

Andris

Posted by Andris 2 years ago Report

Rag....this is now my most read story of all time. How?

Andris

Posted by Andris 3 months ago Report

Two years ago and people are STILL coming back to read this story! Dang. I need to write more like this I guess.