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Ha! Fire and fire! I thought for more than a few seconds about that title, so enjoy it.
Are you really surprised that pokémon eat each other? I thought it'd be common knowledge by now, but maybe that's the vore brain thinking. Claire's friend really came in clutch with this gift, which unfortunately only had one thing on its mind. At least it worked out.
None of the characters are mine in any way.
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Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
This is my first comment, but I would love to see what if the Serperior eats the Victini. Also, would like to see the Victini eat a human.
Posted by RexLou 2 years ago Report
Very good story! I quite like how you worked in-game flavor text into the fic to punctuate certain scenes but didn't rely on it. Both the battle and vore scene were satisfying and I enjoy that the aftermath was somewhat hopeful as well.
Posted by bestgirlRosa 2 years ago Report
It was really fun to write while staying in theme of the battle! I'm glad it came out nicely and that you enjoyed it throughout :3
Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
What an amazing story!
I normally don't like doing the in-battle writing for Pokémon stuff, since it leaves so many questions to me and sort of breaks the setting.. (how does the trainer see the moves?)
I also just find it more entertaining to pull through with less knowledge, but here.. it kinda worked!
I'm only left questionable on how exactly the Pokémon are being revived again.. but I'll leave that to you!
It was a fun read, and the only thing I found missing was some weight gain stuff / disposal (From what I understood, digestion didn't finish 100%, so dunno if weight was gained in the process).. oh, and how was there an event serperior in the wild?! :p (contrary)
Anyways, nice story, well written! Have a nice day! x3
Posted by bestgirlRosa 2 years ago Report
Well firstly I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I was hesitant on staying in the theme of battle the whole way through, but I found it too fun to stop :P
Secondly, I wanted to keep this one a bit cleaner so I didn't go into much of the aftermath of digesting all those Pokémon. Leaving it open to interpretation as to what happened after was part of the charm, at least in one way or another :)
Thirdly, I assumed someone would notice that the serperior was oddly strong and had its hidden ability (Only losing to victini's rather strong throat muscles.) Let's just say there may or may not be some digested trainers out there that are the cause for this phenomenon ;P
Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
Yeah, that's fair! I think the only thing that's left kinda unexplained is still how they're getting the Pokémon back, but it's neat that you even thought of the hidden ability stuff signifying it being owned by someone (at least if we go by game rules)!
Posted by bestgirlRosa 2 years ago Report
Yeah, I left it a bit open-ended. Whether or not they get revived is up to your interpretation :3
Looking back, I could have done a bit to imply that serperior was once another trainer's Pokémon, but oh well. Maybe I'll be more thorough next time I do Pokémon stuff lmao