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A young blacksmith with a strong affinity for magic is discovered by the Headmistress of one of the most prestigious sorcery schools in the world.
My first take on fantasy. There's a lot of world building here and it might come off as info dumping. I hope it doesn't but its my first time explaining how a world works.
This piece does not have as much sexy stuff as my others, but its building up to that for the next chapter.
Let me know how it reads and if you like the world so far.
Word Count ~ 19.4k
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Posted by AzurePheonix 2 years ago Report
Oh yes, this feels like a nice buildup to something really nice! Looking forward to a good full tour scene in the next chapter.
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Hopefully I'll pull off the pay off in the next chapter.
Posted by Yumyum18 2 years ago Report
Another adorably sexy read.
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Thank you! :)
Posted by dikcock 2 years ago Report
This story really hooked me, can't wait for the next chapter!
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. Hoping the wait won't be too long.
Posted by Destroyah23 2 years ago Report
Awesome work dude, I hope you never burn out and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. Also gotta say that I hope that Rowan and Cecilia get together romantically or even (and this is my selfish thinking) Rowan gets a harem.
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Thanks a lot man. Writing is slow but I don't see myself stopping anytime soon. And Rowan will definitely experience a lot of new things at the school.
Posted by oakheart19 2 years ago Report
Way I see it slow writing is a mark of quality if you write fast you make mistakes take your time there is some novel quality plot here
Posted by Pik 2 years ago Report
What can we expect next chapter to have like more vore or unbirth?
Posted by LGShifty 2 years ago Report
This story was exceptional and I really hope you keep it going, fantastic stuff!
Posted by Mucsf95 2 years ago Report
Thank you! Next chapter should be coming out soon :)