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Time to alienate all my potential readers with fanfiction for a game I'm pretty sure no one on this website has ever played!
Refantasia: Charm and Conquer isn't a very good game honestly, but the players I've met have been quite friendly. This story was originally posted on the discord server we used to talk and share art and stuff. The prey are all based on enemies fought during one of the regularly occurring events in the game. The characters and location are my own creations.
I'm pretty sure this is by best vore story so far, mainly because the crowd I originally made it for weren't all into vore so I added extra details and characterization and stuff, which I'm not usually that great at writing.
Anyways, this is the last of the stories I've already written, so expect a fairly long time until my next post.
I hope you enjoy the story and check out my gallery to see what else I've written.
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Posted by RexLou 2 years ago Report
Interesting story and definitely worth the read. I think you could work on how you format your documents, as some words dig get a little mangled by Ekas.
Other that that, this was really enjoyable. It had a lot more thought into it than a lot of other Macro/Micro vore stories with Ian very much treating his meals like food that squirms. I'll be interested in seeing how your style develops over time, and if you end up incorporating "flourishes" like onomatopoeias for gurgles, swallows, and burps.
Though I don't know much about the material, this is still a very good story.
Posted by randomguywhosthere 2 years ago Report
I still need to work on properly integrating onomatopoeias into my works without it coming across as a jarring, but I'll definitely work on improving on that front.
I'm super new so if you know anything about formatting that could help me avoid random errors please let me know.
I don't expect, like, anyone to know anything about the source material for this one lol. A lot of this is just stuff I made up that happens to be sort of related to the source material so the few who actually do know the game would recognize it.
Thank you very much for your feedback!
Posted by Choco0 2 years ago Report
I absolutely loved the setting and concept of the whole story, and that was very well written as well!
Not many people get to tickle those aspects of vore that I particularly enjoy ~
I can't wait for your next story!
Posted by randomguywhosthere 2 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Out of curiosity, what aspects of vore featured in the story were it that you particularly enjoyed? I'd love to know!
Posted by Choco0 2 years ago Report
Ohh, I would say first the whole casuality of it is a big turn on for me. Like, I love that he’s just a dude enjoying a meal in a seemingly random restaurant.
Also M/F vore, male pred / female prey is a huuuge turn on for me too! I have a thing for helpless prey. Especially in this story, where those prey are usually dangerous and feared creatures inside the water, and I like how helpless they become outside their environment. Just to be casually slurped up by some dude. That’s hot! And the pred pull it off perfectly. Especially when he talked to the last prey before swallowing her down.
I also like when a pred does gentle / almost caring actions (like when he playfully tickle one of the prey), before just swallowing them down afterwards.
Oh and a cute boy pred is always something I thrive for :)
Also lastly, even if it’s an unpopular opinion, I enjoy when vore is not sometimes sexualized in a story or a picture. It’s just something that is happening.
Also sorry for the late answer, I didn’t check if I got a reply since I almost never receive any ^^
Posted by devildog11725 2 years ago Report
Absolutely enjoyed reading it!
Posted by randomguywhosthere 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!