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Having to work overtime is never any fun.. especially when Penny has to take an extra shift on "pole duty" due to an unexpected rush on
spit-roasts. Will she make it through her shift intact, or will she wind up just one more roast on a spit, turning over the coals?
Uploaded with permission from htabdoolb, this has an alternate ending from his great original story.
Thumbnail depicts one of Penny's co-workers, Valerie, being roasted. Image is by CadetLT.
Image of Penny skewered by fukk19900909 (DA).
Image of man carrying heads by tankerace42 (DA).
Images of Kayla being spit-roasted by Razer1911.
Image of Valerie with sauces applied by Meatlover.
Image of returned heads by Meatlover.
Image of Penny full-cooked by Rowke.
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Posted by htabdoolb 2 years ago Report
Okay, I'll admit that I expected a bit more when you described this as an alternate ending, haha. Four short sentences appended at the end does technically qualify though, I guess. Unless I missed more that you added in the middle somewhere? Oh well, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story in any case.
Posted by kbDArt 2 years ago Report
Yep, there were some subtle changes in the interior of the story to set up the ending - not a lot, but some. But yeah, it was a great story originally.
Posted by Benoven 2 years ago Report
Wow, this story is amazing. Fantastic work. I am only on chapter 9 but this is a great story. If i could choice the way how i give spit roast then would this be my fav. way.
But i wonder how many girls Wanda have roast. If you say that from the first shift only one girl survive and from Penny's shift the other girl survive then we have 10 girls. And they have the while day fill up the roasters. So i think Wanda have roast a least 20 girls. The company was very hung4y on this day lool
Posted by kbDArt 2 years ago Report
Oh yeah. She roasts quite a few to fulfill her requirements for the large party. All praise should go to htabdoolb though, as this is his story with only a few subtle tweaks by me. If you haven't already, you should check out his gallery. I know he has one other Dolcett-themed series.
If you're strictly looking for Dolcett, I'd recommend BunnyWrites or grunt_killa - some really good stories by each.
Posted by Benoven 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the hint. I know grunt_killa but bunnywriters is new for me. And i will look in the gallery from htabdoolb. Thanks again and i wish you and your family a Merry Christmas.
Posted by kbDArt 2 years ago Report
Likewise. :)
Posted by Seydlitz 1 year ago Report
Could you repost the full version of this please? I thought I had downloaded it, but must've forgotten since I saved it as bookmark. So imagine my disappointment when I opened it to read it again only to discover it to be shortened.
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
Will do soon Seydlitz. Probably in a day or two.