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Dragon Dad's Christmas Surprise By Oniric -- Report

Hello everyone! I'm a few days late, but better late than never!

It's that time of the year again. For the sixth year in a row, I've written a Christmas-themed story. Which is pretty funny since personally I don't really care about Christmas all that much, but hey, it's a good excuse to force myself to write something.

This year's story is a bit weird and more than just a bit dark (at least compared to my usual stuff), but still quite sweet. It's definitely not for everyone, but I hope that some of you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

Synopsis: A young feral dragon obsessed with humans receives a very unusual Christmas gift from his father, and proceeds to have some fun with it. And maybe eat it as well, because dragons are hungry creatures. Will the "gift" be alright? Maybe. But one way or another, this will be a memorable Christmas for our peculiar dragon protagonist, and a great opportunity to bond with his father.

Content warning: This story features sex between a feral dragon and a human, in the context of a master/pet relationship with consent being very dubious, in addition to consensual incest between father and son. There's also oral vore, regurgitation and frequent discussion of digestion, although the fate of the human prey is left ambiguous. There are also a few mentions of bestiality and animal death, and minor cum inflation.

Story length: ~6000 words.

That's all for me this year. Happy Holidays!


NOTE: I'm uploading this as PDF instead of a Word document as usual because something went wrong with the formatting and I have no idea how to fix it. I hope that's not a problem. :S

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DragonDad

Posted by DragonDad 2 years ago Report

I could say something here. But it wouldn't be true.

Zacerine

Posted by Zacerine 2 years ago Report

Honestly i really liked a lot of the story. Father son stuff is really fun. But i didnt like the fafher very much. I liked the son and pets relationship until the father kept pushing and pushing. I was also curious what the promise the dad made to the human was. Id honestly love to read a second part with the son and human having more fun and the son actually getting more information about his pet and growning closer to him. But i know this probably wont happen since you left it ambiguous on purpose. The father just got a little on my nerves with the peer pressure and treatment of the human when he was scared. I feel it would have been interesting if they actually gave the human commands to squirm if he starts to feel hes digesting. That way the son would know but he also still has the option to keep him in there or let him out.

Sorry for the paragraph. I guess i just really enjoyed it and felt very passionately about it

Oniric

Posted by Oniric 2 years ago Report

That's fair! I wrote the father like that to contrast with the son, to represent the "traditional" expected behavior of a dragon and how the son is unusual by going against it. The idea was to create an internal conflict in the son between wanting to follow his own desires and wanting to please his father by doing what he thinks is expected of him. So the pushing/manipulation was intentional, but I see how it can be annoying.

I like your idea of the human being told to squirm if he starts digesting. It makes me wonder what could happen if the dragons were already asleep and digestion starts. Maybe the human wouldn't want to risk making a fuss by waking them up and just accepts his fate to avoid annoying the father. That would be kinda sad for the young dragon, though.

As for the content of the promise, I wanted to leave it open to interpretation, but... it probably didn't leave the human with much of a choice...

And don't be sorry, I love getting detailed feedback like this! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Zacerine

Posted by Zacerine 2 years ago Report

It definitely would be nice to see that side of the story where the human does squirm because he doesn't want to upset the son either. After all hes the son's pet not the dad's. Plus seeing the son get alone time with the human away from the father's prying eyes would be interesting. And seeing them actually grow more close sounds nice.

I feel like it would have been nice if the father told the son what the promise was too so that he could hold hold his dad to it. What would the point be of the promise if the father just went back on his word? Plus I feel the son would feel more for his human if he knew the context.

I imagine he sacrifices himself to spare his family or even his home