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Wedding Night with Ajax By TrWrDr -- Report

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Ajax and her commander spend some time together on their wedding night.

This is my first vore story so I would appreciate any feedback you can give.

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Andris

Posted by Andris 2 years ago Report

You have talent if this is your first try. Well done. A good take on intimate relationship ub.

TrWrDr

Posted by TrWrDr 2 years ago Report

Thanks. I've done quite a bit of non vore related writing, so it's not the first story I've written, but I'm glad you like it.

Fusz

Posted by Fusz 2 years ago Report

I'm not a huge fan of giant vore, but I must admit that it's a very good story, the writing was excellent and I liked Ajax's relationship with her piggy (Marcus), without a doubt a very good job!

My only complaint would be that it doesn't have the "azur lane" tag, if I didn't see the name "Ajax" I would have missed this story, but it's nothing that affects the story.

TrWrDr

Posted by TrWrDr 2 years ago Report

Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't realize I missed that.