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Thumbnail came from wikipedia, again. Under this link. Let's say "Creative Commons" tier thumbnail's are what I'd aim for if going visual here; https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/7/72/Pregnancy_-_belly.jpg
Now, with that disclaimer out of the way;
Had some lingering projects I'm on/off on. But as is? Needed to take a break from them. As such...
You know what time it is again? Break writing time! This time, to a sort-of spiritual sequel to a previous story; "Compressive Flexing".
I'd say more, but better of letting this short story say it all. Give or take saying that I'm mildly inspired by a certain rare unbirth story on Literotica...
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Posted by Harleking31 2 years ago Report
Damn, very good
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by skorm 2 years ago Report
Your first story of the year and what a deception to! You make it out to be so innocuous , but build from there along to the climax that not all is quite as it seems , and more he can’t pull out , perhaps he had it coming since he’s cheating on his gf but this I found very sinister as she’s not done . This really was a good spiritual successor and a happy new years to you to.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliment!
Again, have a few more things on the works. But as is, energy is the slow delay on getting them done and writ.
Posted by skorm 2 years ago Report
Hey no hurry a good story can’t be rushed and I’ve seen some of your longer pieces take it easy pal, your work is always a treat that’s well worth the wait.
Posted by ConEditor 2 years ago Report
Which Literotica story, if I may ask?
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
"What Comes Around, Goes Around."
A rare, wonderful Unbirth story where a literal dick male gets unbirthed by a predatory lady.
I only took loose, spiritual inspiration from that story under the "sex, followed by Unbirth" and the males name.
Everything else, is entirely original work. Based on an original 'sequel' idea. Which honestly, is inspired by that Literotica story.