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this is my first post im not exactly "good" at writing but hope you enjoy
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Not bad at all! Pretty rough on the grammar, and maybe two times where it was hard to tell who was talking, but that didnt stop me from ejoying it. Also lots of kinks im all for so this is def a fav.
Posted by johnnyboy246 2 years ago Report
english isnt my first launguage which is probobly why, and i guess it also dosent help im dyslexic but it is what it is. thanks for the feedback
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 9 months ago Report
Definitely a fun read. And a lot of stuff I like in here~ even if I'm a tad disappointed that it ends up being non fatal as that's not quiet my thing, I still really enjoyed it~
Tho I will admit the "forgiveness" from Sarah at the end felt a biiiiiit rushed/forced imo. Tho that's totally fine for a first story. Definitely eager to read more of your stuff after this~