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Another commissioned sequel! You can think mrmetroid for this particular piece!
Time has passed since Tock completed her hunt of Weiss and gained a new passenger in her life, her criminal life goes on as she hunts down some new prey and grows used to her new weight! But when she catches the eye of the notorious Little Miss Malachite, all eyes are on her new special little method of catch and deliver. And it might just be catching!
Read part 1 here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/769442
You can also find the picture for the thumbnail here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/867072
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Been wondering but does this story take place in the same setting as the ones with Neo and Trifa?
Posted by CadenGallic 2 years ago Report
Yep, and the same one as the Yang, Ruby and Neo story too!
Posted by thequietmanno1 2 years ago Report
i've loving the blossoming relationship/romance between these two. They bring out the best in each other.
Posted by CadenGallic 2 years ago Report
It was quite fun to write, to give them something to bond over.
Posted by thequietmanno1 2 years ago Report
I especially like Tock's possessiveness/ownership of white. It seems like she's not really had something of 'hers' all her life, and now she has a hold of Weiss, she's keeping a tight hold on her. I'm hoping any sequel stuff would deal with Tock and Weiss getting separated in some fashion and how both feel about that change.
Posted by CadenGallic 2 years ago Report
I think there was a throughline of that, yes. Maybe I just sort of unconsciously worked it in by thinking of the character.
That would be interesting! This was a commission so maybe someone else will want to explore that, or I might just write it myself someday.
Posted by JackSpades 2 years ago Report
This one was a sweet read :3
Posted by CadenGallic 2 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by Metalization 2 years ago Report
This was fantastic, i hope we get to see their partnership continue to "grow"
Posted by CadenGallic 2 years ago Report
Glad you think so!
Posted by bellylov3rs 2 years ago Report
Oh gosh this was so lovely I hope there's more as I'd love to see them develop further, maybe Weiss being bash and quietly asking for some prey one day.
Maybe they develop more of a love/annoy relationship as they journey and grow to care for one another even if they won't fully admit it right away.
Maybe eventually Tock let's get out at least in private sometimes but swallows her back down in public
Posted by CadenGallic 1 year ago Report
Heh well I'm glad you liked it enough to want to see more. No promises but I have been considering something of a follow up.
Posted by HangryDemon 1 year ago Report
Good read honestly. And the art piece that comes with is also pretty neat.
Posted by CadenGallic 1 year ago Report
Yes I can never thank my luck enough someone liked this enough to do something so good for it.
Posted by HangryDemon 1 year ago Report
There's something to be said about how good your writing skills are then!