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First time posting here as well as my first time writing anything like this. I'm open for requests but I probably won't do a lot of it. I'll be honest, vore is just a part of weight gain/stuffing for me so most hardcore vore stuff like disposal and gore aren't my thing. Also, only adult humans (plus fantasy races like elves ig). I'm open for feedback/criticism. You won't hurt my feelings. Hope ya'll like it, even though it's super short
Thumbnail is a pic of ssbbw model Veronika Jade.
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Posted by Norio 2 years ago Report
That was so good ;_;
I can't wait for more of your stories and welcome!
Posted by MadDifferent 2 years ago Report
Thanks, excited to post more soon.
Posted by Alpha2105 2 years ago Report
>...The tight frame of Jessica's stomach crushed the thick thighed woman and highlighted almost every feature of her body.
T-Through 600lbs of goth? I'll be honest that did throw me off a bit, but it's bit of nit-picking in an otherwise great start to you gallery.
Less inconsequential was how little Jessica ended up being described after her weight gain. It's alright (and sometimes better) to have the reader rely on their imagination for a one-off character's appearance, but just leaving it at "big and goth" felt half-baked. You should try experimenting with body types/fat distribution in the future to help describe your larger characters.
Anyway, welcome to Eka's! Or congrats on breaking your lurking streak ????
Posted by Alpha2105 2 years ago Report
Pretend those question marks are a heart emoji, just learned the hard way this site doesn't like those lmao <3
Posted by MadDifferent 2 years ago Report
Appreciate the feedback. Thanks for the welcome.