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I had another short story idea to incorporate Desh, my snake character. This is a sequel to A Pet Neglected told from a first person male perspective. Enjoy!
Posted by simalst 1 year ago Report
I liked the story, but Charlie appeared a little presumptuous in the ending of that story in my eyes. Maybe a third perspective and nobody coming to meet the snake? Or first perspective without that words, that she cannot help him? Just thoughts, hope you don't mind my opinion. Else the story was very nice.