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Moving in with a Predator (Chapter 3) By Vesari -- Report

Chris and her new friends check out the campus sororities, but they get a little more than they bargained for. And Chris makes a rather dangerous enemy...

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The end of the Introduction Arc of my new series! This time around, I'm going to be trying something a bit different. Rather than doing one continuous story, I'm going to be breaking MiwaP into smaller, self-contained arcs, soft of like a manga style. At least, that's my plan. I've already got a few 'arcs' planned out, and also something from Vicky's perspective as a short story. Stay tuned...

On Patreon this week, my new short story "Ms. Randwick's Second Job" is now out. Your scary and sexy boss, Ms. Randwick seems to have nothing but contempt for you. But a chance meeting outside of work might give you the opportunity to get closer to her... If you'd like to read it now, you can click here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/83627066

And if you like the story, you can check out my new novel, the Teacher and the King: Battle for the Sun Throne here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0BWP1XZMK?ref_=cm_sw_r_mwn_dp_0TDS5BNK77VSTS8X6920

Thumbnail art from "Danberu Nan Kiro Moteru?", MC's design also inspired Becky. blob:https://mangadex.org/c252eab9-9bb2-4b3b-963c-8da829a07937 (you need the blob part too)

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voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report

I lost track of time after reading this and it’s currently 3am haha this has gotta be one of my favourite vore series that I’m reading at the moment and I can’t wait for plenty more to come! :)

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report

I've lost track of time reading things so often, lol. Feels pretty nice to have someone do that with my writing.

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CrimsonOS

Posted by CrimsonOS 1 year ago Report

I can not wait for the next part and see where it leads and what the friendship between Chris, Di and Kit will be like and wonder if Di will have some conquests of her own

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report

Glad to hear it!

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Sira

Posted by Sira 1 year ago Report

I love all of these characters so much.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report

They were a lot of fun to write!

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feauxen

Posted by feauxen 1 year ago Report

“If you grew up on a farmstead in Idaho

I think you forgot to finish your

Anyway, excellent chapter once again. This setting just keeps getting better and better, I can’t wait for the action to really get started.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report

Good catch, I missed that in my editing. Pretty sure it was just meant to be "If you grew up on a farmstead in Idaho..." with Kit trailing off.

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feauxen

Posted by feauxen 1 year ago Report

I thought it would just end with, "you'd understand," or something, but I guess that works too. Fortunately, it wasn't one of those cut-off sentences where the meaning was unclear, it was just obviously unintentional due to the lack of closing punctuation.

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EuritheSnek

Posted by EuritheSnek 1 year ago Report

Oh wow, just read the three chapters of this and dang, you could cut the tension (sexual and otherwise) with a knife and spread it on toast. I love it. I hope Becky gets taken down a peg at some point (or taken down Aunt Vicky's gullet, either/or is fine by me.)
Love the characters too, from Vicky's sort of 'I dont know how to act around this kid' to Chris and Kit's social cluelessness (reminds me of myself).
keep up the good work~

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slonim

Posted by slonim 1 year ago Report

I like Aunt Vicky! When will the story continue?

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