It's a good story. One thing I suggest is you really want to check the spelling, and you probably want to look through it and do some editing. There's a few extra words you can easily do without. Either then that, it's a good story. Thank you for sharing.
Posted by CanisLupisVulpe 18 years ago Report
It's a good story. One thing I suggest is you really want to check the spelling, and you probably want to look through it and do some editing. There's a few extra words you can easily do without. Either then that, it's a good story. Thank you for sharing.
Posted by Rikahazelius 15 years ago Report
Awww poor alpine =( he could've atleast explained to her.