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Backup Lunch By Esprit -- Report

short story, mostly for writing practice, as i haven't written anything in years.

in a world with big girls who eat people, Quin is a bit of a sad excuse for a mini-giantess, who is pretty easy to push around if you know her well enough. After a tragic cooking accident leaves her hungry and without lunch, she manages to convince her friend, Ian, to let her eat him--- but only if she promises to not digest him.


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GGO

Posted by GGO 1 year ago Report

I really like this story. I like how it is open ended too. Does Quin let him out as she planned? She might forget!

Esprit

Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report

Quin is definitely empty headed enough for that to be a concern XD

hernextmeal

Posted by hernextmeal 1 year ago Report

Hope to see more with these two!

Esprit

Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report

thanks! Quin is my mascot character, so you can be sure she will return in the future

Corvum

Posted by Corvum 1 year ago Report

Oh my, how delightfull~
Need myself a friend like that asap!

Esprit

Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report

would be great to have a gentle (enough) giantess friend, for sure!

littlenips

Posted by littlenips 1 year ago Report

Full tour is the best kind of vore change my mind

Esprit

Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report

i refuse

Endlesshow

Posted by Endlesshow 1 year ago Report

Will this have a continuation or has the opportunity to have one ?
I love it and i am curious and i love the non-fatal jejejeje

Esprit

Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report

i had originally planned for an end where Quin lets ian out in the shower and they have an award moment together, but elected to go with a more ambiguous end for the die-hard fatal people out there (and cause it was easier)

i wouldn't be against writing the original end by principal, but it would be too short. i have and will continue to use these characters, though, albeit in more fatal situations.

Endlesshow

Posted by Endlesshow 1 year ago Report

I see maybe not so short?
Like doing the part of how he pas the school day inside her and how it feels and how sometimes she forgets or something and the part on the shower may be a little like slow? There's is a big possibilities with the original.one just that is a little difficult to imagine DX