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King Triton's Tummy By MrNoName -- Report

The king of Atlantica’s ferocious temper and appetite might have sealed the fate of several chambermaids and one familiar Caribbean crab…

Hey Guys! This idea really came about from JacktheGreen’s (https://aryion.com/g4/user/JacktheGreen) comment on my blog post about a reverse Little Mermaid idea, and I couldn’t stop thinking about Triton’s appetite… I decided to really challenge myself to practice word count usage as I aimed to keep this sub 1000 words. I managed to keep it right at that ceiling and tried my best to make this as solid as possible despite the self-imposed cap. I would’ve preferred to maximize on the overflowing of fat and vore that King Triton is capable of, but perhaps that’ll have to be in a sequel ;) who knows, maybe part two will have Ursula and he’ll have a sudden appetite for squid…

Thumbnail is by me. Feel free to let me know what you guys think of this story, any feedback, constructive criticisms, and input is more than welcome!

~NEW ART! Gluttonous King Triton: https://aryion.com/g4/view/908948#item-itself

*All characters depicted in this story are not of my own. I do not own these characters, and have no intention of making money from this piece. All rights are reserved to Walt Disney Pictures and The Walt Disney Company © DISNEY. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

Word Count: 1,000

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JacktheGreen

Posted by JacktheGreen 1 year ago Report

I'm impressed by this. I really am. And I'm flattered that you thought that my idea had any merit. So I tip my hat to you.

I love that Obesity runs in this family, with Ariel taking after her bhm dilf daddy. By any chance were you influenced by a drawing of fat ariel by Kahuurinzan? I bring it up because Flouder is super fat, and to date that's the only artist that I've seen draw fat flounder.

That said, The descriptions are really great, moobs the size of dolphins. You really hit this out of the park.

And you really did a lot in very few words .

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Your idea holds a ton of merit if I'm going to be honest, I thought about what you said and I wanted to try a solo male pred story (and intentional pred at that) because I've lacked one since my first upload.

I had to look up that piece of art, so initially, I wasn't inspired by it per se. However, I wouldn't be surprised if I had run across it when I was first getting into all this stuff. But, I think I've always had an image of Ariel that's been a hodgepodge of her other fetish/vore fan art, and I drew a decent amount of inspiration from that mental image.

As for Flounder, I think I was more trying to note how round his shape is, but I won't turn away the thought of him being a mini glutton himself!

I appreciate your constant kind words, truly. I won't lie, this one was hard to keep restricted. If I do a sequel, I'm definitely going to let it fly...

JacktheGreen

Posted by JacktheGreen 1 year ago Report

I think you knocked it out of the park on this one. Both with the story and the illustration. And both are great because they pack so much story and fetish content into a very small space.

I don't meant to be pushy, but if you do further drawings of Triton, a full scale of his massive body would be a nice touch.

And while I'm here, a sinking ship would provide a great bounty for either Triton or his daughter.

I'm having too much fun here

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Thank you, I had some more ideas but tried to put as much as possible in it. But I’m extremely happy to hear you’re enjoying it so much!

I’d agree doing a full scale Triton would be fun too, I had written the story by the time I got to the illustration and had already established him in his throne. But I’d love to come back and show his true size and give shine to fatty fish-butt ;)

JacktheGreen

Posted by JacktheGreen 1 year ago Report

I'm honored to have finally read the words "fish butt." I look forward to that