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Sometimes you're talking about deer sex with your boyfriend right before bedtime and a story just kind of happens uncontrollably because of it.
More than half of this story is exposition and I still can't decide if having it be done as character dialog was better or worse than just breaking away from the characters to talk about the world building I had in mind as an omnipotent narrator. I guess it kind of ends as a blue balls either way.
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Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report
Huh, interesting concept! Wouldn't mind seeing more :D
Posted by randomuser13579 1 year ago Report
Interesting world would like to see the daily life of a doe that did catch a husband or if there is any other animal girls with similar dynamic to humans.
Posted by kura1204 1 year ago Report
More please
Posted by Bobgodofallbobs 1 year ago Report
You take Commissions?