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Your Little Cinnamon Bun By AnotherKinkyWriter -- Report

Being such a sweet, kind girl, Sayori only has the most wholesome parts of a vore fetish... Surely she doesn't love the idea of being treated like another piece of food, right? With love, of course.~

I wanted this to be longer, but I couldn't flesh it out anymore, and at the same time, I couldn't get the idea out of my head. Although, being my first attempt at a pred perspective type story, I'm happy with the results. Hopefully you are too!

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APirson

Posted by APirson 1 year ago Report

I really do enjoy reading your stories, because you always play the wholesome side really well. Glad to see another story from you.

AnotherKinkyWriter

Posted by AnotherKinkyWriter 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I enjoy writing them a lot :D

daeway

Posted by daeway 1 year ago Report

That was amazing!
Personally, the POV was a tomboy, short hair, athletic physique, with a paunch and enjoys stuff for both boys and girls, but credit where it is due, I never got the impression I was "roleplaying" as a boyfriend or even a hermaphrodite because you kept it vague! That can be pretty hard to do so congrats!
The burp was another nice touch. I am attracted to the physical comedy of vore: noisy stomachs, burping, awkward swallowing, etc. and that was pretty funny.
Then there is the dominance factor. "Me" eyeballing the cashier and making them fluster was an excellent touch.

AnotherKinkyWriter

Posted by AnotherKinkyWriter 1 year ago Report

Well thanks for the detailed response! I'm glad it hit so many sweet spots for you. I'll totally end up making more pred POV's in the future!~

daeway

Posted by daeway 1 year ago Report

If more pred POV is on the way, are you sticking with ambiguous preds? Cuz I would luv some pred POV from a girl's perspective if not.

AnotherKinkyWriter

Posted by AnotherKinkyWriter 1 year ago Report

I'll probably mostly do ambiguous, but y'know... I may have a couple ideas for a girl POV story

hiimbad

Posted by hiimbad 1 year ago Report

Didn't expect to like a pred pov story so much but damn this is good

AnotherKinkyWriter

Posted by AnotherKinkyWriter 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much!!

NikoMessiah

Posted by NikoMessiah 4 months ago Report

hhhhhhhh

AnotherKinkyWriter

Posted by AnotherKinkyWriter 4 months ago Report

I do concur