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Debra's Full-Filled Complaint By MrNoName -- Report

Debra’s complaint seems to be full-filled…

Hey Guys! This idea came to me as I was feeling a little burnt out from a fan-fic I’ve been working on. I wanted to keep it tight, hence the limited word count, but I’m enjoying both Debra and my OC stuff a lot lately. I always liked the idea of a ‘Karen’ pred, and I can’t help but fantasize about other stories similar to this. But regardless, I hope you guys like it!

Thumbnail is by me, you can check out the image in the link below, or in my gallery! Feel free to let me know what you guys think of this story, any feedback, constructive criticisms, and input is more than welcome!

~NEW ART! Never Shop While Hungry: https://aryion.com/g4/view/916899
Previous OC Story! Mr. Stacy’s Slutty Snacks: https://aryion.com/g4/view/914841
Check out the OC Stories File: https://aryion.com/g4/view/909591

Word Count: 1,209

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HangryWriter25

Posted by HangryWriter25 1 year ago Report

I love Karen preds.

MissSocky

Posted by MissSocky 1 year ago Report

Me too! <3

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Same :)

Mirandalawsonvoreslut

Posted by Mirandalawsonvoreslut 1 year ago Report

After reading this i think it's any excuse to get food in her belly! A nice quick story, my stories just seem to elongate as i write, a pantser type i think they call it. So if you read them they are lengthy but hopefully good. Again good read!

JacktheGreen

Posted by JacktheGreen 1 year ago Report

Normally i'm a fan of Karen prey, but this one was spectacular. The wet shirt alone was worth it.

And don't take this the wrong way, but the story is better than the drawing. your drawing is good, but this story is so rich and lush. It was so overloaded with sensory information and O cup boobs that I lost my senses.

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

I'd never take that the wrong way! I feel much more confident about my writing than my art as it is. It's funny you mention the sensory info, I was trying to pepper in some more imagery because I noticed some of my stuff lacked the other senses lol. Great to hear that was picked up on!

JacktheGreen

Posted by JacktheGreen 1 year ago Report

your art is great, no two ways. But this story felt like you were firing on all cylinders. And as a friend of mine who writes romance stories says, touch, taste and smell are some of the strongest ways to evoke emotions

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Thank you! Those are certainly the biggest tie-ins to a great reading experience, your friend is absolutely right, and sounds very knowledgeable!

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 1 year ago Report

Fantastic story. I wish Karen preds were more common.

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Thanks <3! It's an underutilized pred and lends itself to an amazing plot trope, the "hangry pred" :)

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 1 year ago Report

Absolutely perfect, desperately needs to be more Karen pred content out there.

I really need to get more stuff done with my own Karen ocs

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

Thanks! there really should be! It's such a good power difference and an excellent show of dominance

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 1 year ago Report

Absolutely, power difference in vore is so great and Karen's elevate that even higher since they exude such natural supremacy of course they wouldn't bat an eye at turning someone into food even if they're not hungry just to remind them of their place and to pay for upsetting them.

MrNoName

Posted by MrNoName 1 year ago Report

No care, no worry, just more food to stuff their gullets... lord, I fantasize about that being reality...

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 1 year ago Report

An amazing reality it would be. Big sexy bossy Karen's lugging their beautiful bulging bellies around.