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The Sleepover By TheSecretBacon -- Report

Alternative title: The Ghost of Gulper's Moon

Yeah... I'm admittedly not too proud of this one. I don't expect it to do very well. I kind of rushed it. I literally got all of this written down the day before our beloved 8/8, and that was in the midst of having a VERY bad day.

That being said, however... I hope you enjoy this story anyway, and Happy Vore Day 8/8 to all this year!

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Diversity23

Posted by Diversity23 1 year ago Report

Happy Vore Day :D

TheSecretBacon

Posted by TheSecretBacon 1 year ago Report

Thank you!

Yumyum18

Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report

Damn, Gulper's Moon sounds like a hot night

TheSecretBacon

Posted by TheSecretBacon 1 year ago Report

The hottest night for all in Swallow Creek~!

JackTex

Posted by JackTex 6 months ago Report

Interesting premise for recurring stories. I like the bait and double-take pattern. Always good to see everyone enjoying themselves. :)

TheSecretBacon

Posted by TheSecretBacon 6 months ago Report

Oh~? What do you mean by that~? (It's been a while since I wrote this one.)

JackTex

Posted by JackTex 6 months ago Report

I meant that you can use the holiday/event for other stories like on other years, or maybe that's not what you had in mind. By bait and double-take I mean the classic setup of luring them in somewhere, and then followed by realization and jumpscare essentially.

TheSecretBacon

Posted by TheSecretBacon 6 months ago Report

Ah yes, Gulper's Moon. Only in Swallow Creek does that ever happen. I might use it again, been tempted to use the idea again in another work, only referencing it again in Fast Food, which is basically a celebration of everything I've written before it.

IIRC, I only had Tuan jumpscared. The idea was to turn each of their "scary stories" against them.

JackTex

Posted by JackTex 5 months ago Report

That works. :)

TheSecretBacon

Posted by TheSecretBacon 3 months ago Report

That's why I did it~