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My first story uploaded onto this site! For context, Garnet/"Garlic Girl" had done a party trick where she'd swallowed a bunch of objects, but days later, the objects still sit in her gut, and she has to do errands with the objects and their consequences.
Inspired by the "Garlic Girl" mascot (credit to the Garlic Girl company: https://twitter.com/GarlicGirl_info ), and by the art of her done by Susfishous (credit to Susfishous: https://www.deviantart.com/susfishous/art/Garlic-Trick-776574407 ). Thumbnail image by Alamy (https://www.alamy.com/a-quantity-of-green-glass-bottles-in-a-see-through-plastic-bag-ready-for-recycling-and-collection-to-be-re-used-environmentally-friendly-processing-image181349307.html)
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Posted by Indighost 1 year ago Report
Interesting story, I'm surprised she could not pass a finger ring. Assuming you are going for realism and not a specific kink, I follow news stories about this and most often a swallowed ring is passed all the way through the intestines.
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
Thanks! And good point, I didn't think of that. Maybe an excuse could be she got lucky and it got caught between some other objects.
Posted by Diversity23 1 year ago Report
Happy Vore Day :D
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Wow! This is some great stuff! Probably the best object vore ive ever seen! I love regretful preds, and this dials the idea to 11! Such fantastic stuff! The way she kinda knew hot to nurse her tummy implied that she'd done this before, but her pain was still extremely prevalent! The pacing was great! The detail was spot-on! Amazing!
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
Thanks a million! Really glad to hear you enjoyed the story, as well as the tropes and details!
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Absolutely! Glad we can kinda bond over object vore, I'm REALLY getting into it right now! Thanks again for reading my story by the way!
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
Glad to hear, object vore's pretty neat! Plus I love the use of regretful/unwilling preds in your stories/setting.
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Thank you! Yeah regretful and unwilling preds are definitely a favorite of mine, the way their body's needs are fighting over control with their brain's wants... their body becomes something the pred doesn't want to see... it's so good!
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
For sure, the pred's stomach almost acting like its own person separate from the pred, digesting whether the pred wants it to or not, and their body's needs starting to influence their thought processes, I could go on lol
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Oh yeah... hearing their prey beg for mercy that they can't give, seeing their body change via weight gain... in my 4th chapter i even had Nerva cough up a hairball soaked in blood... it's the realization of what her body was doing...
Oh and it's all even better if the prey's kicking is painful to the pred.
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
That too, little details like that make the vore feel more “real”, more consequential. On a similar note, maybe nausea, having to really force the swallow, or the squirming feeling weird.
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Exactly... lets keep going. Sleepnessness will attack this poor pred... dread... maybe the pred gets told to off themselves... they feel nothing but lonliness and dread...
Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report
Oh, this is quite good!
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by HangryDemon 1 year ago Report
This is really good!
Shame the links you posted to the art ain't workin
Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Also good catch, I put a ")" symbol at the end of the urls by mistake, they should be fixed now.
Posted by HangryDemon 1 year ago Report
Yep! It's all good now!