So context, I've been a long-time member of the vore fandom, though i've never written anything myself due to lack of creative drive. But recently I rediscovered an old fic I long thought lost and the reality of the fic didn't live up to the memory I had of it in the years I spent trying to find it. So it compelled me to expand and rewrite the story, keeping the same basic premise but expanded vore sequences and some light characterization.

I highly recommend the story I took inspiration from, which i'll link here. Her work is fantastic and want to give credit to the author who came up with the concept.

https://www.deviantart.com/quinncrystal/art/April-Fool-s-VORE-298582778


I'm open to any and all critique. I'm feeling inspired to maybe write more fics if interest is there. Hell, maybe even if it isn't there. Having some trouble with formatting from word to the site. Will upload an edited version with better formatting on dialogue text when able. ty for the patience

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