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An Impossibility In The Back Of The Library By WaterWheel -- Report

I was just trying to read in peace when I was subjected to something I never could have imagined.

I have been writing a lot recently for some reason. My last few stories have been more pred focused, so I went with a prey POV for this one. And I also tried out first person rather than my usual third person.

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WaterWheel

Posted by WaterWheel 1 year ago Report

If folks have time I would honestly appreciate comments on what folks like or dislike about any of my works. This story has been getting a lot more favorites than I was expecting it to, so I just really would appreciate any feedback.

R_U_Snacksize

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 1 year ago Report

I liked the swallowing process as described.

WaterWheel

Posted by WaterWheel 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the feedback

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 1 year ago Report

Very nice work; loved the description in this short story - the 'swallowing' motion was a new take (for me) on Anal Vore.

WaterWheel

Posted by WaterWheel 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the comment.