Posted by Four_Spears 1 year ago Report

Symmetry tool or not, I'm interested in Althea.

Posted by XRayGun 1 year ago Report

I know she's pretty out there compared to the stuff I usually post, so I'm glad to hear you like her!

Posted by bladeduckshadow 1 year ago Report

Fantastic

Posted by XRayGun 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much!

Posted by bladeduckshadow 1 year ago Report

No problem

Posted by trash1234 1 year ago Report

That story was really great, awesome job man! I really appreciate the fact that Althea held off on her desires instead of taking advantage of the fact that he'd gone through the stuff he had, and he wouldn't be making certain decisions consciously. I'm looking forward to seeing more of them in the future! (hopefully with a more aged up Elias haha). Seeing the leech go mostly to Althea's ass was also a plus :33
I feel like the narrative went pretty nicely, although I'm not that much pro non-con sex I get that something like that may have been required to make the leech more villainous and I have nothing against others who enjoy that type of stuff. The descriptive parts were also quite well done, and if it wasn't clear before I absolutely adored the designs of Althea and the Leech (tho as I said before I'd personally enjoy a more aged up Elias ;^v^;). Well done once again!

Posted by trash1234 1 year ago Report

I'm really sorry if this sounds silly or rude or somewhat poor grammatically speaking, I'm tired as balls :3

Posted by XRayGun 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed, and I certainly would like to do more with the characters at some point— showing them at different points along their timeline together (i.e. with Elias at different ages.) I'm happy to hear that you liked the descriptive sections, since I think those are where my writing is strongest.

I can certainly understand not being a fan of the non-con elements, but I thought it was appropriate for a smut-fic, established the leech's irredeemable sadism, and hopefully demonstrated how she would use both physical and verbal violence to instill fear that she could feed off of. That said, I may have gone a *little* too far.

As for the matter of Elias' age, I can appreciate how it's not to everyone's tastes, but it was just the sort of pairing I wanted to see with a MILFy monstress. If I do end up making this into a series, there would likely be another installment directly following this first story— and after that he would grow into a young man through the following installments.

And don't worry that you sounded rude, I think you communicated your preferences as politely as I've seen.