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A Sign for the Kingdom By Voyager99 -- Report

Woo boy has it been a while since I last posted here. Life has not been kind as of late and my creativity as slowed. This has been in the works for a while now ever since I found this post on reddit ages ago with some interesting comments to boot.
It sparked the idea for this story that had been sitting in stasis for the longest time.

They say an image image is worth a thousand words. Well this one is worth about 21k of those according to my Google Doc count. Not sure if I ended up loving it in the end. I feel like after a while I was just polishing a turd (pun intended) but I had already wrote far too much to not post it. It's less plot more plops so those in the market for that here ya go!

For anyone curious of the post/can't see the image in the pdf version I'll link it here!

https://www.reddit.com/r/Damnthatsinteresting/comments/zo76v9/toilets_in_a_medieval_castle/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

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AzurePheonix

Posted by AzurePheonix 1 year ago Report

Everything about this is more or less perfect. The plot, the world building, and most of all the descriptions. I always appreciate it when disposal is written as a major part of the process, and not just an after thought. Nice work.

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Voyager99

Posted by Voyager99 1 year ago Report

Ah this means so much! Considering I thought this story was a bit thrown together and not some of my best it's nice to hear someone enjoyed it! Thanks for reading! I also hate disposal being thrown in as a one liner or something at the end. Might as well not even include it at that point. Part of the whole reason I started posting here lol. Not too many male pred writers that go all out on the scatty stuff imo.

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WhyMustI

Posted by WhyMustI 1 year ago Report

This is amazing! Your work is always absolutely wonderful and this is certainly no exception! Such a lovely cruel pred and I love seeing willing prey immediately regretting their decisions, not to mention poor Knox. Just lovely all around ❤

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Voyager99

Posted by Voyager99 1 year ago Report

Much appreciated! I was really not feeling this story for a lot of it and thought I went too much with the disposal ngl but I'm glad to see people enjoy it for what it is! Willing prey realizing the true horrors of their actions vs an uncaring pred simply go together~ And while Knox is in utter hell at least he can expect a better paycheck this time around. If Kazren is so grateful that is heheh

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Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 1 year ago Report

Fantasticaly written and detailed. Absolutely love it

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