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Hey everyone, sorry that this chapter is a week later than I intended. Not only did I feel that I had to extend the length due to the contents, but college work this past week was pretty hefty which reduced the free time I had.
Now this chapter has a lot of Vore in it, also some minor depictions of gore.
What do you want to see when Akari wakes up? A good deal of time (as many as two or three weeks are possible) will likely have passed when she finally does wake up, so keep that in mind with your suggestions.
Suggestions will be taken until 11/25/2023.
As always critiques are more than welcome.
If anyone wants to see Akari's current Character sheet, let me know and I will post it.
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Posted by Jamesbrid 1 year ago Report
I think she will be imprisoned by the bandits customers, or the extended group that will check in on their allies.
If not she will have to pack up all the stuff and sell it after admiring her gains.
Posted by Jamesbrid 1 year ago Report
I think she will be imprisoned by the bandits customers, or the extended group that will check in on their allies.
If not she will have to pack up all the stuff and sell it after admiring her gains.
Posted by javier464 1 year ago Report
Another food coma, can't do anything with a stomach that big.
Posted by Chupathingy1990 1 year ago Report
Maybe wake up to a cute nice boy tending to her. (I'm a sucker for Pred/Prey romance but you don't have to go down that route)
Posted by Moxx 1 year ago Report
Presumably she'll grow quite a bit longer. Probably have to grow stronger as well from the regeneration rebuilding her body into a form that can contain that much food. Plus whatever she manages to absorb from her victims.
Between the polymorph drakes and the kitsune, perhaps some limited shapeshifting, to make adventure other than just wandering the forest more feasible?
It would be amusing if she had slept long enough to end up overgrown with a flower field or something, and have little animals playing on/around her.
Overall, the capacity limit being revealed as 100 kinda cuts off further adventures in that direction, since continuing to push the limit seems logistically impractical. (It was already getting on the silly side long before reaching her limit.)
Less murder would be nice, as it undermines the challenge, as well as the value of the regeneration boon.
Posted by SlimeGreen 1 year ago Report
I agree with this option. I’ll add on my own behalf that I would like not only Akari’s strength to grow, but also her entire body. Maybe even her body would have evolved. Would there be a new pair of hands or another addition?
Posted by Schmidtyyy 1 year ago Report
A new set of arms would indeed be into to seen and would also add a new aspekt to any futur combat and vore situations.
Posted by Schmidtyyy 1 year ago Report
'Would indeed be interessting to see'
Posted by Brisngr56 1 year ago Report
Okay, unfortunately characters in this world do not gain abilities or body parts from vore, just possibly attribute points. Second, I'm sorry that the narrative did not make it more clear, but the drakes were polymorphed by the creator of the seal that held their cage shut. Polymorphing is not an inherent ability of drakes.
Sorry again if I confused things, I know I am not the best when it comes to making story elements clear.
Posted by Moxx 1 year ago Report
No problem. I was just spitballing ideas, since there's not much world lore to go on.
Posted by rbrdiesel 1 year ago Report
hopefully she wakes up in a field of flowers with far larger breasts, some minor shapeshifting, and a much greater prey capacity.
Posted by rbrdiesel 1 year ago Report
oh, and her overall size grows for sure.
Posted by Brisngr56 1 year ago Report
Some of that is certainly possible and even likely, but characters in this world do not gain abilities or powers from consuming others. Just the possibility of getting attribute boosts. So shapeshifting is not really something that Akari can gain.
It's partly so I don't need to make a lot of the gluttonous characters in the future with extremely bizarre bodies and powers.
Posted by rbrdiesel 1 year ago Report
thats a good way to do it. still doubt theres much out there that can eat her at her current size.
Posted by Brisngr56 1 year ago Report
There is almost nothing that really could without it's presence waking her up first. Unless she gets very unlucky and a true dragon flies over and decides to have a large meal.