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Humans on a distant space base make first contact with a strange alien woman who has a unique way of transporting people.
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Posted by Ender9107 1 year ago Report
You obviously did some research in the process of making this. I don't think its too common to just know the atmospheric pressure, exact oxygen percentage, and temperature in kelvin of Earth. Very cool.
It was also pretty funny how everyone handled vore so casually. Even though you were self aware about it, the point still holds.
One little thing though. I was going to name my siren pred from my last story Selia in my next story with her, but that's just Selassia with a few letters removed. It's a bit troubling.
Posted by skorpio 1 year ago Report
Yeah, I had to look all of that up. I feel like it's stuff the characters would know.
Go ahead and use the name Selia! It's not that similar.
Posted by Eldritch1 11 months ago Report
I won’t go so far as to beg for it, but I’d be thrilled if you ever followed up on this one. It’s great, and so creative and interesting! Definitely don’t feel obligated if you’re not up to it, just saying there’s interest (from me, if no one else).
Posted by skorpio 11 months ago Report
Thanks for the nice comments about this story! I'm working on some other stories first, but I would love to revisit this world and these characters at some point.