Posted by balanced-guy 1 year ago Report

Proportions look good, really emphasizes that she's full and probably used to eating people, particularly given the size of the thighs/hips. That one bulge up near the top of the sleeve should probably be smaller as it suggests the sleeve should be baggy or has been pulled back, but the rest of the sleeve doesn't suggest that.

I would also suggest angling the boob flesh a bit, they kinda feel like they should be sitting on a smaller/lower stomach bulge I'd also remove that thick black line you left on the visible breast and redo the linework again, to look more clean and defined.

Posted by kpmii 1 year ago Report

The thick black line on her left breast is supposed to be her uniform's ribbon

Posted by balanced-guy 1 year ago Report

Yeah but in its current state it looks like a leftover line you missed or forgot to remove. So I'll suggest making it more clearly a ribbon? You have talent, you just have to refine it further.

Posted by JeebyHeebies 1 year ago Report

Welcome to posting and great first pic!!

Posted by Boneman 1 year ago Report

Aside from the bulge that balanced-guy mentioned on the sleeve, the only other thing that I find really out of place is that some of the colors spill over significantly. Noticeably covers up some of the linework.

All in all, I still think this is really good. Keep it up!

Posted by AXELA1987 1 year ago Report

Mira ese potencial

Posted by GloriatheDevourer 1 year ago Report

Wow! Incredible first picture! So lovely and well done! For being new on this of drswing vore you get it quite well!! ^^

Posted by Amagi2 1 year ago Report

Looks great, I hope you'll open comms eventually

Posted by kpmii 1 year ago Report

god i wish that were me

Posted by Uchihabiscuit 1 year ago Report

Love her, also perfect vore trope for her tbh