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A mother tells the story of her daughter's predatory growth.
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An alternate ending to one of my older stories, one of my personal favourites. I'm back from my holidays, and ready to write again. I've also almost finished that new project I've been working on! I had hoped to debut it by the end of 2023, but there were some delays with people who were helping me. Thankfully, things are back on track now, and it should be out by the end of this month!
Speaking of alternate endings, I have another one up on my Patreon/SubscribeStar. If you enjoyed my story, "Valentine's Day", you might be interested to read it's alternate ending. This time around, Miss Tamura's Valentine's Day has quite a different outcome... You can read it now by becoming a subscriber:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/96419969
https://subscribestar.adult/posts/1115405
Thumbnail art (and inspired) by "kyoshourz", https://img3.gelbooru.com/images/a3/67/a367ab95dfe3d153452958fdeea0b569.jpeg
Posted by Alumni 1 year ago Report
One of my old favorite stories on this site, back at it with an alt ending that certainly does it justice. Phenomenal work!
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Posted by feauxen 1 year ago Report
It’s hard to call these expanded ending ‘alternate,’ since they could realistically have happened in the original story. But I’m certainly not complaining, a longer version of the same story I already liked in never going to be unwelcome. I have to say though, while I haven’t looked into length or anything, calling these sequels might be more accurate. And if you do that then people who are just after the new bits wouldn’t have to skim past the rest of the story. I’m not complaining here, exactly, I think doing that helps set the mood as you have to read some of the preceding events to make sure you land in the right place. But it’s something to consider if you’re going to continue with both alternate ends that actually change to original and these expansion pack “alternate” ends; differentiating the two might be a good idea.
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Posted by Sira 1 year ago Report
I love a good romantic happy ending.
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