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Rite of Rebirth By BlossomDancer -- Report

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Kinda first ever bit of writing I've been happy enough to post. (So apologize for any roughness)

The Lamb (our magnificent leader) learns a new ritual, and needs the help of a guinea pig... or in this case, a Fox.

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StarSpectre

Posted by StarSpectre 1 year ago Report

Gonna be entirely honest. It's been a while since I've been able to properly enjoy a story- Some just feel like a drag, while others can be... Nice.

This, though, it's honestly just rather lovely. Provides a bit of an unnerving tone as Thely had no idea what fate awaited 'em, just for the lamb to throw in a surprise, then just the path on to the months blending into one another-
And a nice little ending, to show that the race isn't quite done yet. Proper good read, bug. Did good. :>