Posted by Kaguya1 1 year ago Report

OKAY SO.

"Continuing her cute gesture of confusion, the flesh servant would take a long seat on the cleared floor to start pondering that there was a shift in the atmosphere."

"Gorgeous blue eyes resembling freshwater beamed down at Zhellsum and she almost blushed, out of affection and pure, unrelenting immediate desire for this individual."

"Zhellsum’s lips were drenched in her own spittle as she drooled at the clear cleavage she could see with a smile, her bosom darkened by her nylon bodysuit. Those legs too, they looked like delicious sticks of chocolate!"

"Such a kick that would be bombarding the amalgamated being’s senses as she thinks, the fiercest blush imaginable painting the complexion of her face in a cutesy bright red."

"“Mmh-mmh-mmh! Such fun~”"

ZHELLSUM IS SUCH AN ADORABLE LITTLE FUCK.
I HAVE NOT ONCE BET PUT OFF BY HOW CRAZY SHE MIGHT SEEM.
SHE IS SIMPLY TOO ENDEARINGLY CUTE WITH HOW SHE TALKS.
I LOVE HER SO MUCH.


that being said...

"In an effort to snuff out the flames of her resistance, a small red glow infiltrated the green hue currently overtaking her physique and that red began to expand… The fluorescent green seemed to be faring well against the slow corruption of it’s coloring but over the moments that went by, the crimson color bled over the green until there was none left."

this is always a neat bit, i enjoy this concept and hope you expand on this more.

"Matting her tongue and pressing on it, the squirming toes of her adepti-snack would unwillingly play with her mouth and feed her those flavors she so desired. Which speed up the absorption in accordance with the amalgamation’s hunger."

BUT MAAAAN...cloud mommy was unexpected and a REALLY nice surprise from you, i was lowkey hoping you would do something with her and i am so glad you did...she is very hot, very delicious looking and i am still sad i got diluc'd when trying to roll for her.

xianyun was always full of herself and pretty strong, so i think you captured that aspect of her very well with how she and zhellsum were constantly bouncing off of eachother.
it was really fun and cute.


"I'm not gonna lie, these last two months really haven't been the greatest for me at all. While I won't go into detail, I am uploading this as both an addition to the series and to inform you guys that I apologize if these aren't uploaded as frequently anymore. My living situation has changed, some things have happened in my life, and I am unable to conjure the ability to just write whenever I want anymore."

now, i want to be as clear and concise as i can when saying this.
i have always enjoyed this kai saga of yours since day one, and i will continue to enjoy, appreciate, and adore any upload you make about anything that interests you.
for me, personally...life really sucks, you know?
however, your writing...really does mean a lot to me.
i love the feeling of being excited and hype for what you could be thinking of what to right next, and the joy of seeing another thing from you in the message box.
when i finally have the chance to read something you put lots of time and effort into, it gives me time to escape from the world, a moment to be absorbed into the series of events that take place in what you have written, and that kind of experience never gets dull for me because i really do appreciate what you do for us.
that being said...
please take care of yourself.
please please PLEASE.
i dont think you should have to apologise when your physical well being and mental health are infinitely more important than how fast you can write the next thing.
do what you can to be as comfortable as you can be in life.
put yourself first, because you matter.

as always, take care, and thank you for being here<333

Posted by vamobokita 1 year ago Report

I'm starting to think that you are an alt account from the author

Posted by ShadowXCP 1 year ago Report

An unexpected, but extremely delicious prey!
I always look forward to every part of this wonderful story, keep up the great work.