Oh goodness, my first vore art

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Oh goodness, my first vore art

Postby Geno » Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:25 pm

First vore art, first topic, FIRST POST.

I dunno. Man, okay... I spent a while trying to think of how to do the stomach and I'm still not satisfied. I would love to hear your thoughts on this piece of mine which happens to be my first. It was fun and interesting to make, to say the least...

Characters include VonFoxFire's "Sapphire" and my "Geno" from good ol' Second Life. Some other notes: I'm not sure if this image is too large for you all or not. I think the pic is 900 pixels tall, which is larger than the average 768... Should I upload it a bit smaller? Anyway... The pic! I talk too much!
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Very nice

Postby gamdann » Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:35 pm

Pretty good bud, the fox girl is a real cutie, and your character looks like hes enjoying a nice natural Jaquzi.
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Re: Very nice

Postby Cangeor » Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:37 pm

Very nice picture, and, what's most important, very nice technique. Simple and effective. Congratulations!
P.S.: The fox girs is really VERY cute. Just as a good pred should be.
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Re: Very nice

Postby Humbug » Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:40 pm

Heh. She looks like a mixture between Christy Rai, Krystal, and Sharue. Interesting.
I like the way you did the stomach acid. It's not the way stomach acid works per se, but it really does look like acid. The little bubbles and the mist from popping bubbles are a nice touch. Oh, one more thing: Her belly button's a little low. It should be right below her hand or so.
Anyway, for a first vore pic, this is pretty impressive. Way t'go.
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Re: Very nice

Postby Kisiro » Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:57 pm

Very nice piece. I really like how it turned out. =) Great job. ^^
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Re: Very nice

Postby SeruOmen » Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:03 pm

Great work~!^^
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Re: Very nice

Postby Nasonxian » Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:36 pm

Great job ^_^ Nice details
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Re: Very nice

Postby DarkArtist » Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:43 pm

Your first vore and indeed lovely. Good Job!
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Re: Very nice

Postby Shinnigami » Tue Dec 05, 2006 5:29 pm

Great work. The pred is waaaay cute. I would want to take that guy's place any day.
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Re: Very nice

Postby Chaos » Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:32 pm

Cute pred + Internal shot of the stomach = :D me
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Re: Very nice

Postby Geno » Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:34 pm

Oh wow! Thanks for all the nice comments, you guys :3 And yeah, you're definitely right about the belly button, Humbug... I guess it didn't register until you mentioned it.

Glad you all like the pred, too! I'll be sure to pass the word on to Von

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Re: Very nice

Postby Umiriko » Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:34 pm

wow very nice indeed ^_^ she looks so statisef with her meal, and inside all snuggled up hehe ^^ very very nice work indeed, specialy for a first time gratz
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Postby SyH » Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:44 pm

nice, pretty good
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Postby Dorogato » Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:09 pm

Looks awesome, the lack of lines and the colors work great with the colorful chars.
The expressions are great too, on both sides :P
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Postby Akram » Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:19 pm

O _ O

*falls in love with the cute fox girl*


^_^ awsome!
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Postby SollusDellager » Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:31 pm

Well if thats your fist vore art I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Postby orbit2345 » Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:49 pm

pretty good for a first try. keep up the good work :)
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Postby Jurodan » Wed Dec 06, 2006 12:52 am

Cute, a little fuzzy, but that's not bad for a first pic. Far better than anything I could do.
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Postby Dagoth_Ur » Wed Dec 06, 2006 1:57 am

*yays!* wow so cute ^^ love the pic!

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