Ok, so part 4 just keeps getting bigger and bigger, and I'm not sure what to do.
I reached a point at about 7000 words, where I felt I could end it on what I feel is a pretty good cliffhanger.
However, that would mean stopping before I got to the vore and sexy stuff I was hoping to include on this chapter.
(Really it would leave part 4 as not much more than the conversation Jeremy and Gabrielle have when they get to his apartment, and a bit of light cuddling.)
On the other hand, I've continued onwards, as of writing this I'm at around 8200 words, and I'd be surprised if I could reach the point where I'd originally intended to end it before hitting 12000, which let's face it, is pretty damn long for a piece of erotica, certainly much longer than the...
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