Samus was training. The next Smash tournament is just around the corner, but there is a thing for this tournament; it was only for females.
Samus was enitally confused by this. But, as she read on the mail that she got, she started to understand. But then, she was more confused then before. What she saw on the next page was weird.
Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: Chalkx
Tags: Furry Scat Dog Soft Vore Anthro F/F Weight Gain Fart Goddess Same Size Female F/? God Pooping Anal Vore Story writing Farting Metroid Gas Implied Digestion animal crossing F/FF Female Prey Female Pred Disposal f/multiple Gassy Samus Aran kid icarus Goddess Pred Palutena Super Smash Bros Isabelle Wii Fit Trainer Bones in scat Wii Fit Isabelle (Animal Crossing)
Samus is training for a smash tournament coming up. But when she get details of the tournament in the letter, she doesn't like what she sees...
*This is my first story, so it's not the greatest. *
xIso - 6 years ago
For a first story, it isn't bad.
If I could offer some advice, I'd say try to make people seem different. In all honesty, everyone acted like the same person in a different hat, so to speak. In addition, more detail on the actual vore and digestion and even the disposal would do you well. It was "She's start- oh, they're a bulge already."
Finally, when describing weight gain, describe it more in inspecting terms. Like
"Samus groggily reached up to her chest to grab her chest, feeling the recent additions of her meal squish between her fingers. If she could guess, it'd have been a cup size or two... probably not worth the loss of her washboard abs."