DC Fetishverse – Gotham Gurglers
N - An Offer for Ms. Kyle
“Ugh… my head,” She murmured weakly, as the bleariness slowly left her eyes and the world began to come into focus again. “Where… am I?”
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Uploaded: 7 years ago
Owner: WhenTroubledMakeTea
Tags: Fatal Implied Digestion catwoman Unaware Prey Digestion Noises DC Comics Unconscious Prey Unwilling-to-Willing Pred Gotham Gurglers DC Fetishverse
The official 'prologue' of the Fetishverse, written to ease you into what's going on.
I won't actually cover 'The Event' until later, because I want to focus more on building the present, and then clarifying the past.
WhenTroubledMakeTea - 6 years ago
It's honestly quite gladdening to see somebody liked it enough to make a comment.
The Doctor was never actually intended to be Hugo- as I said in the story, our very own Esteemed Science person is a platinum blond.
But in all honesty, it wasn't Hugo because I honestly forgot he existed when I wrote this. Whoops. I'd only just gotten back into comics in general at the time, and my memory was rusty as all hell.
The only regret I have over this is that I never kept copies of the notes. The computer just kinda... crunched itself, I suppose, and needed to be put back to factory settings, and I basically just gave up from then.
I guess I should get back to writing. There's no point having a gallery if there's nothing to put in it, y'know?
Squiggly - 6 years ago
I cannot not see "The doctor" as Hugo Strange.
Great story, I didn't notice any typos, and the overall structure of the story is excellent.
Shame I only just found it.
Squiggly - 6 years ago
Ohh, interesting. I missed that line. Though honestly, his entire demeanor is very similar hahahaha.
You should get back into it! You clearly have talent. What I would do, if I were you is do a quick re-write of the prologue. Going through the motions with something that you more or less have the structure of already can make it easier to get in the zone. At least for me.
Sorry to hear about your computer man, seriously unfortunate.