The Kitsune.
Tom was six years old and he lived with his mother and farther in a large cottage. The cottage was built beside a large forest and that was why Tom's parents lived there because they were both biology teachers and had plenty of specimens from the forest.
It was a warm summer's night and Tom was having a very strange dream, he was walking through the forest and he could hear a voice whispering his name.
“Tom...Tom I need your help Tom”.
As Tom walked deepe
Uploaded: 16 years ago
Owner: shadowfire
Tags: Fox
A young boy meets a nine tailed fox. (This is my first vore story i plan to write a sequel to this) Let me know what you think
tod3690 - 15 years ago
I've seen this on Writing.Com
BlackRose - 16 years ago
your welcome!
shadowfire - 16 years ago
Thanks for the comment.
BlackRose - 16 years ago
Quick and straight to the point! The only things I saw was detail, of course, I am a scrooge for it, but detail and plus repeating yourself, using the same words and such. I know thats hard, I do it alot too. I like the way it was written, flowed better, plus, you did it with kitsunes!! Nice job for first vore story mate!
shadowfire - 15 years ago
aye i have an account on there also