stilluncomfortable - 2 months ago

YES, I got it to work thank you for the explanation. I didn't know that was an issue about the type of file save I made

stilluncomfortable - 2 months ago

Hey, thank you so much for the detailed and kind message. It was very touching to read someone I hadn't met before say these nice things about my work. Especially seeing you seem to be a pretty big writer!

I'm glad you enjoyed the detail and sexual tension. This comment really made my day with this story (I had posted it the day before on reddit and literally got a total of 3 upvotes on it, one from me and one from Shadow lol).

And I did not know there was a video game so I'll be looking that up later thank you for mentioning it!

I hope my grammar will also improve with these stories cause I know thats been my week spot for a lot of work I actually tried with (I have a couple goof throw away stories I wrote for fun. I hope to start another one soon I've been meaning to write for like 2 years now)

Thank you again for your amazing comment! I'll also be reading through some of your stories cause they looked good

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

[b]Important/Helpful Tip:[/b] You don’t need to re-upload this document after saving it as a .doc file. If that is your plan. You can re-upload a document within the same submission. So you don’t lose any of your faves or comments.

1. Go to Gallery.
2. Go to your specific item.
3. Hover your cursor over the item (PC/MAC) or lightly tap near the item (mobile). A green icon with a pencil in the center of it should pop up in the top right corner of your item.
4. Click on the green icon with a pencil in the center of it.
5. A blue window called “Item Edit” should pop up. There should be three tabs (Item Details, Thumbnail, Manage).
6. Click on the Manage tab. Then there will be three options in that tab (Delete Item, Re-upload Item, and Move Item).
7. Follow the prompt in Re-upload item to re-upload the new document within this submission.
8. This action will clear your thumbnail. So you will need to repeat steps 2 to 5 to re-add your thumbnail.
9. Click on the Thumbnail tab and follow the prompts to re-add your thumbnail.

Fatedmeal - 2 months ago

[b]Potential Solution to your problem for future uploads:[/b] Myself and a bunch of other writers have had similar problems. Usually, the solution that most of us arrive at, is that the document needs to be saved and uploaded as a .doc document. Not as a .docx document. The latter has the sporadic space issue interspersed between the letters of words. Feel free to DM me if you continue to have issues or have any other questions.

[b]My opinions of your story:[/b] This was a great tale. I loved the subject, the pred, the vore type, the character dynamics, the conflict, and the resolution. You give attention to appropriate details and choose the right time/place to include the sentences that get the reader to [i]tense up[/i]. An important aspect in any erotic or dramatic work. The “You are mine” when the barista’s butt swallowed the prey’s own set of, smaller, yet shapely, mounds was probably my favorite part. A close second being the scene where the barista had the observer swallow down her [i]special drink[/i].

[b]About Inspiration:[/b] I’m glad to see that there is another vore writer that is into a wider range of interests than just vore. The caption on the FutadomWorld subreddit is a fantastic one (the artist who makes them is quite skilled and probably my second favorite with K-Tonbey being my most favorite). Honestly, the video game the subreddit is based on is also great…and I’m still waiting for the second part of the latest route.

[b]Closing Thoughts:[/b] Anyway…I hope that your stories get more views. As I know that it’s difficult to gain traction as a writer on Eka’s Portal. But I can clearly see that you put a good amount of effort and passion into them, and I hope that you feel sufficiently rewarded for it.

Best,
Fated

AhoyShadow - 2 months ago

With peace and love, cab you blame me?? Look at how she took me in!!! I need that to hapoen to be right now and stat cause it was too good of a moment!!!! Plus... that pantie scene... ohhh~ loved it~

stilluncomfortable - 8 months ago

Haha thank you I tried, really wish I was good at writing :")

And don't think you even have to say bigoted stuff, I'm sure she will be happy to have a tasty cat girl after the nasty tasting lady

AhoyShadow - 8 months ago

Uh.. uh.. yeah!! Men gotta be strong and lead and.. stuff!!!! 030 ... can i be eaten now?

I freaking loved this little story!!!! You did a good job at capturing the characters!!! I loved how she grinded on Finn after Jasmin devoured that Karen!!

stilluncomfortable - 2 years ago

Thanks, was considering extending it and maybe have them fuck with her in the gfs stomach

AnAccount - 2 years ago

Great read

stilluncomfortable - 2 years ago

Thank you!!!

PandaESL - 2 years ago

Fantastic story :)

stilluncomfortable - 2 years ago

Thanks and yeah i wrote it in one sitting and was tired when proof reading so a lot more slipped past then usual. And ill try, just find cause female pred stuff feel very over saturated i end up doing more male preds but will see if i can especially once o have more timr

Mucsf95 - 2 years ago

Very fun and hot read. Could use some extra proofreading but still enjoyed it a lot. Hope you post some more female pred stuff. :)