Posted by Augustin 1 year ago Report

Gobsmackingly good for a first vore story. Very much looking forward to what you write next.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I don’t care to admit how many times I revised this one. Partly it was legit self-criticism, partly just reluctance to pull the trigger and actually publish something. Appreciate the support!

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Posted by mclovin 1 year ago Report

This is outstanding.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Thank you!

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Posted by TastyAce 1 year ago Report

This is fantastic! I'm really looking forward to seeing what you write next.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I’m deciding whether to go deeper in to this OC’s story first, or share some of my other concepts. We’ll see where my muse takes me!

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Posted by Paintalloons 1 year ago Report

Damn, this was incredible. Wish there was a digestion aftermath, but i’m excited to see what you cook up later on.

10/10

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Thank you! There is a digestion aftermath in the next episode, though I haven’t made it terribly graphic. I’ll likely post that in a few days, seeing as I’m getting a good initial vibe on this one.

I’m not that into scat myself, thought for those that are, I can also tease that my drafts have at least a couple of hopefully funny but certainly scatty scenes, down the road. The roughs aren’t fully broken down for publication, but I’d estimate about six more episodes in varying states of completion. Then, if those are well received, I have an outline of a lot more places this can go.

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Posted by OofKing124 1 year ago Report

Wish this had a happier ending with these two getting together instead of the whole betrayal thing.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

I hear you. Brian is not really that bad a guy, just a little too self-centered, manipulative, and ambitious. He sticks his foot into a puddle, only to find he’s hip-deep in quicksand and sinking fast.

It might be an interesting exercise to rewrite to an alternate ending. I can assure you that there are potential romantic interests in the wings for “Marie” - and that is not, in fact, her real name.

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Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report

Stupid reporter: a goddess can NEVER be full, nor can she be tricked

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Hehe! Directionally accurate, though “Marie” isn’t a goddess. Well. Not yet, not entirely. She is surely more than human, though, details to come!

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Posted by SunnyCGI 1 year ago Report

Very well written and pleasing to read.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

Thank you!

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Posted by ilikeafatass 1 year ago Report

Greg, the fuck up.

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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report

One trouble with lying and conspiracy is getting everyone to keep the story straight…

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Posted by ElysiaBale 11 months ago Report

Very impressive work! This story is a lot of fun, and you have a lot of talent. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Posted by rugosian 11 months ago Report

Thank you! The initial “bang” entry seems to be getting better reception than the sequels, so far. The larger story I have in mind to tell is a pretty big one, but I am also trying to make sure every chapter has enough ‘spice’ to be amusing on its own.

I know that people hate getting into an episodic saga and then left hanging in the middle - like, what sort of popular, well-paid published author would do such a thing, right? (Heh)

So I’ll keep chugging out chapters and see what y’all think. 4 and 5 are almost ready to go, will post soon!

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Posted by mclovin 11 months ago Report

We’re pretty simple readers I think. While all this cult and magic setup is cool and all, we just want to see stuffing and vore en masse

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Posted by rugosian 11 months ago Report

What are you telling me, @mclovin? That I’m too fetish for mainstream, and also too mainstream for fetish? :-D

I suppose I could fall into such an unhappy valley. Doing my best not to, by both telling the best story I can craft, and also making sure there’s plenty of spicy scenes along the way. Hope I can jump-rope with that line convincingly enough that many here will enjoy it!

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Posted by Grec0R0man 10 months ago Report

God! This was freaking fantastic! I'm glad you faved one of my own stories, otherwise this absolute voracious gem would have went completely under my radar! I absolutely loved Marie as a pred!

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Posted by rugosian 10 months ago Report

Thanks so much! I found you through a mutual follower, so I’m sure we’d have crossed paths eventually. Still, glad I took the time to look through my watchers and see what else they like. I’ll have to sweep back through your archive some more, once I’m done with my own writing for a bit!

Also, I haven’t been actively writing or posting here until a little less than two months ago, so it’s not like there’s been a ton of time or exposure yet. I’d like to believe that I have ideas for several subsets of the vore story consuming population here, but rather than get bogged down doing a lot of different things at once, I’m trying to drive the Marshkin Saga to what I feel is a natural place to pause, i.e. “end of book one.”

Also, while there are multiple preds in my saga, I haven’t been spending a ton of time and detail on vore scenes where it’s just random mooks getting nommed. I’m setting up for some bigger payoffs, but that means building characters up for a while before they come to their final journeys. I don’t know how many readers will be that patient.

So, I think I’ll be doing some more “interlude” chapters. Those will be shorter, more free-standing vore tales, with a shorter buildup and a faster payoff. I’ll find the right balance, soon enough!

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