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Spend a day in the shoes of two police officers who are eager to uphold the law and protect the citizens... As long as 'uphold the law' means doing whatever they want, and 'protect the citizens' means filling their bellies...
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Some people who have been long time fans might recognize this story. It's one of my old ones that I'd thought was lost back when I lost my old laptop to water damage, but I discovered it deep on my cloud drive. With a bit of editing and updating, it's ready for you to read (possibly again)!
On my Patreon/SubscribeStar this week, a new chalter of Moving in with a Predator is out! This week, Chris and Aunt Vicky hit the mall, with Chris in dire need of a new bra. But unbeknownst to them, two horny preds have snuck into the change rooms and are eating customers and staff one by one... You can read it now here:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/moving-in-with-103155708
https://subscribestar.adult/posts/1261504
Thumbnail art by "j@ck", https://img3.gelbooru.com//images/96/8e/968eee2bf29a7fb33dceab0b006de622.jpg
Posted by Raesetsu 1 year ago Report
i was looking for this, thought i was having a fever dream when i couldn't find it
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Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report
*gaslights you* No, you're crazy.
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Posted by Stuff76 9 months ago Report
wake up wake up wake up wake up wake up
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Posted by Dooot 1 year ago Report
If this is how the actual cops in your world act, it makes me suprised how Gelina and Co from the F/M cop story weren't enlisted.
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Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report
Well, my stories aren't really in the same canon unless noted, I feel like.
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Posted by Dooot 1 year ago Report
I can tell this is one of your older stories as tbh it isn't as good as your newer ones. There's barely any details in the actual sexy events(all of the vire sequences are about 1 paragraph long at most and the sex scenes, while more numerous, are even shorter.
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Posted by Vesari 1 year ago Report
Yeah, it is kinda striking to go back and read my older stuff. I really don't feel like I'm writing any different, but I guess it's changed very slowly.
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Posted by IddlerItaler 11 months ago Report
I did not mind the conciseness. Less description on the sex and swallowing can give more focus to the characters and their dynamics, and those can be just as sexy.
I also feel like vore writers don't need to go all in on the purple prose to detail how this or that feels.
"The last thirty minutes of Cassie's life were certainly her most unpleasant." and the following paragraph was all very powerful.
Though I guess every reader has different wants and a different sweet spot on the action/description balance.
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