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After an excruciating day at work Alisa wanted nothing more than to settle in at home, grab some food and veg out for the rest of the night. Unfortunately for her, her roommate's a mukbang streamer and she's stripped the place clean of all food. Desperate times call for desperate measures and Alisa makes a decision she'll soon regret.
First story! Nervous as all hell but hope some out there appreciate it. Comments are always welcome. Constructive criticism, suggestions or even just showing some love, anything is appreciated.
Some stylings are inspired by iliketoread 's writing. He does excellent work. You're missing out if you haven't given his gallery a look.
Thumbnail is AI generated because I'm broke as all hell.
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Posted by Discordance 1 year ago Report
I think you’ve got a real knack for this. Wonderful story, I hope you continue to write. Thank you!
Posted by DocClamor 1 year ago Report
Hey hey! Appreciate the kind words, it’s really encouraging to see comments like this. I’ve got a ton more coming in the near future, so thanks for boosting the motivation.
Posted by Grec0R0man 1 year ago Report
Fantastic! Dude, this was NICE. Great detail, love how Jennifer was both willing and somewhat unwilling of a pred, and I cannot wait to see what your going to do next! <3
Posted by DocClamor 1 year ago Report
Thanks brother, I appreciate that! I really want to explore the different avenues of cruel nature, this one being more of a "conflicted" style was fun to write, glad you liked it!
Posted by Animo24 10 months ago Report
Ohhh this was some AMAZING. I really loved fhe setting and how the chat was involved. The tease at the end about the drug hit allll my buttons
Posted by Gapemaw 7 months ago Report
A very promising first offering.
Hit's a lot of the best buttons