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Marianne has a dangerous secret. She does her best to keep it under wraps, but it has a bad habit of slipping out and, when it does, girls tend to disappear. Her study session with her fellow Golden Deer proves to be no exception.
This is the 1,000 favorites celebration story as voted on here: https://aryion.com/g4/blog.php?id=77384.
Thanks to all who voted, I hope you enjoy the story.
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Posted by Draconatedz 1 year ago Report
Incredible story, the pacing is wonderful, and I love what you did with the real thoughts being crossed out text throughout the tale. I'm a sucker for mind control mixed with vore, and you also did it with my favorite 3H girls! Bravo.
Posted by ScarKnight 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I've never done mind control before and wasn't a hundred percent sure on the strike-through effect, so I'm glad to hear it worked for you.
Posted by Vilebird 11 months ago Report
Amazing story! the synopsis on the poll already sounded good and you really delivered on it, and then some.
the way the POV's conflicting thoughts are presented in the narration is the icing on top, thanks for the goodness!
Posted by ScarKnight 11 months ago Report
Thanks! I am really glad people are liking the strike-through effect, I had fun with it.