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The plural of Nui Harime is Nuis Harime. The Past tense of Nuis Harime is Nuised Harime.
I feel like Ryuko is rather underrated as a pred, so for my first submission to the site, I decided to throw her a Nui-shaped bone. Based this story on their fight at the end of episode 13 and added a voracious twist. I also decided to have some fun with Nui's prêt-à-porter ability, which in itself is another largely untapped goldmine of vorny potential. I'm glad to have finally finished it and I hope you all enjoy!
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Posted by TheMystique 11 months ago Report
Hey! Starting your career off strong. Kill la Kill always brings back high school memories. Nice story, hope to see more of your activity. Your dialogue was in tone and the burps were nice, combined with knowledge and passion for the work.
Posted by Fritzchen 11 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the feedback.
I do currently have a couple of other stories in the works, so I don't intend to disappoint you in that regard.
Posted by pinchr 11 months ago Report
oh hell yeah this is good. it’s weird to me how little ryuko pred there is tbh. She always ends up being prey in stuff, which I Personally find to be a waste of her character’s strengths. great story and good work :)
Posted by Fritzchen 11 months ago Report
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it and I agree; Ryuko really is vastly underutilised as a pred.
Posted by AnonymousBellyFicGuy 11 months ago Report
So glad to see someone treating everybody's first tomboy crush right.