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A Cruel Artoria’s Wild Hunt By Fatedmeal -- Report

Summary: Artoria Lancer Alter, the King of Knights that leads the Wild Hunt, fancies a light stroll in a mountain range. Ritsuka’s buxom and regal servant is even decked out in her own hiking gear. The young man, unwilling to let an opportunity to bond with the distant Lancer pass by, decides that he should join the physically strapping and overwhelming King on her trip. Of course, concerned for their master’s safety, and a bit envious of the preferential treatment that the Lalter was getting, both Mash Kyrielight and Jeanne d’Arc Alter decide to join them. Thus, the four of them embark in a tale of romance, pedigree, and proprietorship. A story of loss and gain.

Word Count: 20,519

Author’s Notes: Yo! I realized that I’ve posted 18 stories this year on my gallery…and only one of them has been an F/GO piece. So this is a story that my Discord decided that I should write, based on the choices given to them (Discord-Decided Story). As I’ve written a cool white haired Honkai: Star Rail Predator (Acheron) and a cool white haired Genshin Impact Predator (Arlecchino)…so now I’m writing a cool white haired Fate/GO Predator (Lalter).

Please let me know what you think in the comments below.
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Character References:
Artoria Lancer Alter (Lalter): https://fategrandorder.fandom.com/wiki/Heroic_Spirit_Traveling_Outfit:_Artoria_Pendragon_(Lancer_Alter)?file=CE827
Ritsuka (Male on right): https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Ritsuka_Fujimaru?file=GOchar1.png
Jeanne d’Arc Alter (Jalter): https://gamepress.gg/grandorder/sites/grandorder/files/2017-09/JeanneAlter2.png
Mash Kyrielight: https://gamepress.gg/grandorder/sites/grandorder/files/2023-03/001_Mash%20Kyrielight_Idol.png

Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112271337

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Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 11 months ago Report

Good to see some Lancer Alter pred on this site, the Artorias are underappreciated

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

Thanks. True. Their gluttony is sorely underrepresented in this Portal.

ChristianBoiy

Posted by ChristianBoiy 11 months ago Report

Not that this is anything new, but my god you have a way with words. So rich and savory.
Maybe it's because I'm desensitized to more and more common descriptions as I read other writers' works, but your vocabulary always floods my brain with imagination juice.
Thank you for uploading!!

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

No problem. I’ve been trying to up my word game, and you’d be surprised by how some mainstream media has had “vore-like” elements or diction without being obtrusive about it to the larger population of the masses. It’s been quite a boon for me in terms of utilizing that knowledge for my own writing.

TempestStorm

Posted by TempestStorm 11 months ago Report

Come on now Mash. We all get vorny from time to time but you seriously couldn't put two and two together? Maybe you do deserve to be poured of the the king's backside. You would certainly be more deserving than Ritsuka and Jeanne, who made the mistake of coming on this hike. And poor Ritsuka. His natural kindness did him no favors here

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

Ever been on a hiking trip, can you say that it doesn’t get you in the mood. I’ve been hiking…but I haven’t been on a hiking trip. So I’m no expert. I just wanted to give you a reply.

Maybe a concise declaration that everyone in Chaldea deserves to pour out of Artoria’s thickened haunches would suffice.

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 11 months ago Report

I feel as though Mash may have been somewhat mischaracterized here, but it bothers me less when your writing is so detailed and satisfying. Excellent story!

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

Thanks. I somewhat blame the lack of time I had to play recent F/GO events, but I will admit that presenting Mash’s character in line with her canon was the lowest on my priority of the three servants. Ritsuka is rarely a priority. As I occasionally just have to their own perversions, usually bestowed in my writing, as one stepping stone to their downfall.

Yea, I think the crux of Mash’s OOC that you are mentioning, discounting the added fetish-addled thoughts, would be not confirming senpai’s status upon experiencing Artoria’s suspiciously aggressive advances and leaving to look for his whereabouts. Thereby, preventing the King of Knight’s digestive victory. And I think that this deficiency in proper character writing in line with canon…might have originated for a desire of parallelism among the three (Jeanne, Ritsuka, and Mash).

Jeanne failing to properly convey her affection due to her fear and self-loathing due to past trauma.

Ritsuka’s inability to parse between intimate affection and being kind and considerate to everyone, without considering their internal feelings.

Mash’s reticence in her daily behavior and conformity to a perception of how each staff and heroic spirit should act within Chaldea. Leading her to not advance forward in her affection.

Basically a love triangle of failed love (unrequited affection) that bordered on the line of netorare due to the wild force that was Artoria in this story.

Anyway, I’ll cut this short by saying that I think this is the first time I’ve written multiple prey in a stomach at one time, which I enjoyed. Maybe I’ll dabble with mass vore something in the near or distant future. We’ll see.

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“Hey! Look! A box of soap!”

SSV

Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report

Another amazing story! Glad to see F/GO getting some love.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

Thanks for commenting. I hope that you were able to enjoy the story even if you aren’t completely familiar with the source material.

Edddd

Posted by Edddd 11 months ago Report

There's just something about a prey being gobbled, digested and shat out by someone who they utterly despise :)

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report

I’m assuming you are talking about that lovely peasant witch. As I think Ritsuka was plagued by mixed feelings during the perfunctory pulverizing of his pulpy form.

Edddd

Posted by Edddd 11 months ago Report

Indeed I am! And yeah Ritsuka had the right idea, almost knew his place :)