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Luna's absolutely obsessive nature with her idolized goddess leads her down a road of regretful pleasure. Will her compassion for a loved one prevent her from making a life-altering mistake? Tags say probably not.
The second chapter of my very first story. Let me know what you honestly think. Comments are always welcome. Seriously, anything you have to say, I want to hear, I encourage it!
Largely inspired by iliketoread’s “The Greatest Magician… Ever?” Fantastic author with fantastic ideas, check’em out when you can.
The thumbnail is once again AI generated because, you guessed it, I'm broke as all hell.
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Posted by Kasra 11 months ago Report
Excellent work on this!
Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report
Hey! I appreciate the kind words. Thanks a bunch.
Posted by iliketoread 11 months ago Report
Great story! I enjoyed the oblivious audience quiet a bit. ...Feels like I've read the story that might have helped inspire this one...
Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report
I may or may not have drawn inspiration from some gentleman in these parts. ;-) Really enjoy that bit myself so I wanted to give it a try haha.
Posted by Animo24 10 months ago Report
Awesome second part I really love the way she has grow to love swallowing tinies
Posted by DocClamor 9 months ago Report
Good deal, appreciate that. :-) That’s ultimately my goal with any multi-part story I want to write. I do want there to be some sort of growth for characters, for better or for worse haha.
Posted by Animo24 9 months ago Report
Absolutely! Are you planning another part? Would be awesome but all yur storys are great so I am happy with any new one :)
Posted by DocClamor 9 months ago Report
Of course! Currently knocking out some commission work but once things slow down I'll be continuing a few of these while doling out some new ones.
Posted by Animo24 9 months ago Report
Awesome!!! :D
Posted by zargein 9 months ago Report
I love this so much, but can you make one where the poor little thing doesn't get digested? I love the panic and the pleas and especially the swallowing, but I always feel bad for the poor girls, even the mean ones.
Posted by DocClamor 9 months ago Report
Might happen, it might not. Can't honestly say for certain because I tend to write things akin to my own personal tastes, but we'll see!
Posted by zargein 9 months ago Report
Fair enough, either way keep it up. I'm so excited!