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This story contains vore.
What are you talking about, of course there were always 8 characters. Indeed: 4 giantesses, 4 tinies. Whoever gave you the idea that there were originally 9 is utterly mad, mad I tell you!
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Posted by Kasra 11 months ago Report
Now THAT's peer pressure.
Posted by doomed 11 months ago Report
pressured him to his doom
Posted by Amidishe 11 months ago Report
Yes, you said it! Peer pressure is going to play a big part in a lot of what happens in future parts haha
Posted by shortboy099 11 months ago Report
Great animation, how ever i do feel the story is a bit rushed at the end. we went from gulp - you ate him!(shock) - wanna be next? - sure (very calm)
to me thats just very jarring, however i really like the story so far keep up the great work
Posted by Amidishe 11 months ago Report
Yes, actually fair point, I see exactly what you mean. I think what happened is that in my mind, Brian is quite the vorarephile, so he was shocked but intrigued as he watched everything unfold. So when he realized that she was going to eat him next, he was going to instinctively let her have her way. I don't think I expressed his intrigue clearly enough and the 'shock' aspect won out. So yeah, I can definitely see how that would be jarring, I'll keep that in mind for future parts!
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)
Posted by shortboy099 11 months ago Report
Im very happy that the feedback is welcomed and just want you to know how much i like you style and story telling ability's. and this story rocks just saying <3
(thank you for not hating me for for the feedback)